Too stiff

Remember - Legs bend at the knees and arms bend at the elbows. Your figures look stiff and unnatural. Also learn perspective. That one scene with the cops outside with the loudspeaker was totally off. I like the concept though, but I don't think the animation was that great to make the front page.

Sorry This Should Be Called Sin City Swipe

In the end credits you really needed to put swipes from Frank Miller. Everything was a swiped except for one scene and that wasn't too good. I mean you traced over Miller's work in just about every frame. It would be one thing if you copied it or even came up with your own poses.

And that scratchy film technique was so distracting and poorly done.

Hey maybe I'll trace over Dark Knight Returns, throw in some tweens, and call it a tribute to DKR and maybe I'll make the top of the front page!

Sorry dude. Zeros all around.

Novelity Side Show Act

I would be totally emabarassed to have this on the front page. If I were you I would go ahead and enjoy my 5 minutes of fame.

It's pretty evident that you have no talent or imagination whatsoever. This crap should be flushed A.S.A.P.

It would be different if you actually drew and animated the dancing figures but instead you plagiarised them.

This made front page to be ridiculed as a novelty. Well the novelty has worn off. Lets make room for some real talent.

And you're the loser kid. And don't ever forget it.