Richeff's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dead Stench 1]

Too stiff

Remember - Legs bend at the knees and arms bend at the elbows. Your figures look stiff and unnatural. Also learn perspective. That one scene with the cops outside with the loudspeaker was totally off. I like the concept though, but I don't think the animation was that great to make the front page.

[Sin City Tribute]

Sorry This Should Be Called Sin City Swipe

In the end credits you really needed to put swipes from Frank Miller. Everything was a swiped except for one scene and that wasn't too good. I mean you traced over Miller's work in just about every frame. It would be one thing if you copied it or even came up with your own poses.

And that scratchy film technique was so distracting and poorly done.

Hey maybe I'll trace over Dark Knight Returns, throw in some tweens, and call it a tribute to DKR and maybe I'll make the top of the front page!

Sorry dude. Zeros all around.

[Warrior Boarder 2]

Keep working at it

I thought it was ok. The strong points were the action sequences. The weak points were the running cycles, angles and the stock sound fx. That car sounded like a Harley.

[Spider-Man Animated Short]

Not bad

I liked it. I'm a big Spider Man fan. You've got a lot of tweening going on. I would have liked to see some in between animation. Like when the heads turn. Let's see something new!

[Burnt Face Man 3]

I don't know

I commend your knowledge of flash and writing but you should work on your drawing more. Even if your doing cartoony stuff you should have a basic knowledge of anatomy. And work on your walking cycles and backgrounds.